A Moment In Time

  The storm rider.

I heard screams and cries.

I heard my sisters yelling.

I saw the darkness in the hallway.

I felt hollow inside.

I felt like I was going to fall out.

Woosh! Zoom! Kapow! 

Would the roller coaster ever end?

I wondered what was going to happen next.

I wondered what wild ride I was going on next.

By Jayden Davies. Week 2, Feb, 2019

Dear Future Generation Perswading piece of writing

Dear future generation 

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Fun fact the earth is 4.5 billion years old,  mankind about 140 thousand years old, let me put that in perspective if you condense that 24 hours which is 1 full day we would be here for, drum roll please, 3 seconds now look what we’ve done in that 3 seconds we made ourselves look like homo sapiens meaning  wise men smart yes but not so smart but it’s good to be smart but not too smart for you’re own good but they cut down trees and pollute are world technically trying to kill us by suffocation trying to make us suffer for this, Money this wouldn't make me so sad if there weren't so many pictures of leaves on it you know what cut the beat i’m not sorry this future world I do not accept it an error does not become a mistake until you refuse to correct it so hurry up people go on everybody if you cut down a tree at least plant 5 more so we will not be equally extinct. 

Eastern or Texas Diamondback rattlesnake

Eastearn or Texas diamondback   rattlesnake

Oh what’ what is that it looks like a rattlesnake of some sort?.

I know what that is, that’s a Eastern brown diamondback rattlesnake. Those things can eat small mammals such as rabbits,rats,birds and sometimes even lizards. Since large size adults can easily eat adult rabbits there have been reports on some eating turkeys.

Jayden Feedback Around Your Writing Goal

Feedback Around Your Writing Goal

What is your writing goal? My writing Goal is Vocabulary.

Where are you at the moment and how will you know when you have reached your goal? 

I think I am at stage 4 Vocabulary and how i will know that I have achieved my goal 

If you have reached your goal, can you put some evidence up on Seesaw to show have achieved it?

How are you inviting feedback from fellow students, teachers, and your own parents?

What is your next goal? How did understanding your new writing goal happen? Did you begin the conversation or did someone else. 

What reading is going to help you with your new writing goal? 

Your tasks: 

Challenge a learning partner to place their writing on SeeSaw. 

Share your feedback and end with a question. 

You can use the mentoring sheets to help you with great questions.