Monday 9 November 2020

Poem

The moonlight shone off the crashing waterfall

Crash the water went, the falling leaves landed in the rough wavy water

I could see the yellow and orange leaves falling leaving the trees bare

The leaves were like a blanket for the wet grass. The noise was dead silent the only thing  that made noise was the golden waterfall crashing onto the stony creek the fresh water soothed my cut skin and it slowly washer away the blood from my skin

By

3 comments:

  1. Anonymous9 November 2020 at 13:56

    i think that your warter fall and i ilike your suff and i thnk that it is good i like it

    ReplyDelete
  2. Anonymous25 March 2021 at 13:59

    hi jayden,i really like this story the picture is actuals cool

    ReplyDelete
  3. Anonymous5 May 2021 at 11:07

    Hi Jayden i really like your poem. I like the way you used a simile. Maybe you could fix up the typos.

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

Note: only a member of this blog may post a comment.

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)